The problem is that kid at school are not turning in their homework or they are turning the homework in late.
Give Evidence:
- Kids are getting bad grade
- Not paying attention to what grade they are getting in class
- Not paying attention to what the teacher is saying about the assiment
- They are not doing the work because they don't feel like doing it
Explain Contributing Factors:
If you don't turn in your homework then you can't pass a class or you get a bad grade. If you turn your homework in late, you still get some points put you wont get full credit on your homework and you will get a bad grade. If you don't pay attention in class and to the teacher you will not understand what you are doing and you will not understand what the homework is all about.
Propose A Solution:
When you get your homework done and turn it in on time you will get a better grade in school. If you pay attention to the teacher and pay attention in class you will understand what the teacher is talking about and you will understand what the homework is about also. Doing better in school will help you get into college and will make your parents very happy and maybe they will let you go out more becasue you have a better grade in school now. So do what i say " TURN YOUR HOMEWORK IN ON TIME AND YOU WILL GET TO GO TO MORE PARTY!!"
1 comment:
Hey Cynthia.. Nice work and stuff. Yea I still got a whole lot to do and I am on the part on commenting others. So far behind. Well I personally thought your blog was really nice. On how you gave evidence on why and how. Unique. Well laterz.
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